You have a Facebook friend living in another country and s/he is curious to learn about a major news item in your country. Write a letter to your Facebook friend. In your letter describe a news story in your country explain why people are interested in it say how the story personally relates to you

Dear Aseem, I am writing
this
letter to let you know about the latest vaccination scam in my country. Since you were keen to know why
this
vaccination blunder has
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world's
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attention and what is the inside story, here is the story. The government has started
immunity
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dose for the age group of 18 above and every person can avail
it
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of it
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for free with the appointment only.
However
, a few health workers started selling in
black
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market for 100 rupees without booking any slot for the same. In order to do so, they are injecting people with just water
instead
of a real dose.
Last
Tuesday, when one medical representative has his turn to get the vaccine, he saw that staff
didnt
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didn't
take out vaccine injection from the
ice box
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icebox
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and it was quite surprising as everyone knows that how to store
such
vaccinations in cold temperature. He made a video and viral it on
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social platforms which
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everyone's attention. Due to fact that it is
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of one's health people are concerned about it and asking for the genuinity. I am kinda worried too as I booked the appointment for my whole family
this
week. I am in
dilema
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dilemma
to get it or not? So
this
is the whole story about it. Bye for now. Take care.
Brijal
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Bridal
Brinjal
Submitted by brijal_desai on

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