Write about the following topic: A healthy person is often described as someone who has a good diet, gets plenty of exercise and avoids stress. What should people do to stay healthy in your country?

keeping oneself healthy is very important. Just physical fitness is not a
defination
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definition
of
a
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healthyness
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healthiness
but being happy too.
People
should follow regular work out and keep themselves surrounded by positivity in order to stay fit and stressfree. Average
people
describe
healthyness
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healthiness
as doing
excercise
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exercise
exercises
and eating
fat free
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food
.
However
, according to
dietician
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and
nutritionist
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, apart from having diet
food
and
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out, a person has to be tension free. Due to the fact that a regular thirty minutes walk not only keep you fit but it will release toxins and make your mind anxiety free. Many surveys proved that daily brisk walk or running will reduce accessive fat from the body and it keeps your mood light through the day. Some
people
have
eating
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disorder
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and end up gaining extra weight. They do not bother about taking care of themselves unless they face any common illness due to
unhealthy
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an unhealthy
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lifestyle
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life style
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for
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example, blood pressure related issues or diabetes. Since
people
are not aware of the health issues they might come across in the future, they are less
concern
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about eating healthy
food
and doing basic physical work to keep them healthy.
Nonetheless
, there are so many better ways to encourage
people
to live
healthy
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a healthy
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life
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. The best way to initiate
this
habit, the
schoold
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school
sould
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should
could
have health campaign where they can teach the students what kind of problem can occur in the future if one
doesnt
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doesn't
eat nutritional
food
and do not perform basic physical activity
for
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instance,
daily
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a daily
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walk or a jog. Even corporate offices can arrange marathon
activity
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activities
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to keep their
employee
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employees
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fit. The government should put hoardings about physical fitness advantages and mental health
program
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.
Helpline
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can play a vital role to reach out to
people
who are not able to push themselves to lose weight or
having
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any depression or anxiety. In conclusion, awareness of physical
fitness'
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fitness
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benefits and how it can help to increase your life span and keep you happy, will lead to
healthy
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nation.
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