In many countries, a small number of people earn extremely high salaries. Some people believe that this is good for the country, but others think that governments should not allow salaries above a certain level. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
All over the world, a tiny group of
people
make high financial gains. While
a part of society
thinks this
is necessary, others feel that the government should limit it to a certain ceiling. Jobs
in areas such
as public service, banking and advertising are generally better paid. Some people
would point out that these jobs
are essential for society
, and, as those positions are usually filled with the best people
, with good curriculums, also
they should be well recompensed. It is said that people
with good skills have spent enormous effort and money on education and should be fairly rewarded. On the other hand
, there are those who say high salaries do not mean that high values are been delivered to society
, and there should be some regulation to apply some ceiling to remunerations. I agree with this
statement because we have many jobs
that are essential to our society
and that delivers
good value to it. Correct subject-verb agreement
deliver
Although
the high paid
positions are usually occupied by Add a hyphen
high-paid
well skilled
persons, that does not mean Add a hyphen
well-skilled
society
will be benefiting
from those work. Related to Wrong verb form
benefit
this
, we can mention the 2008 subprime crisis, which origin was
in the heart of the financial system, where CEOs, analysts and consultants were paid millionaires wages, and still they led the economy to a very bad situation with millions of unemployed Correct your spelling
originated
people
. In summary, we are living in a society
where a small number of workers take home huge amounts of money, and there are those who agree with this
situation. However
, governments should apply some limit to remuneration because high paid
Add a hyphen
high-paid
jobs
does
not mean high value delivered to Change the verb form
do
society
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Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
The easiest way to score well on the IELTS Task 2 writing portion is to structure your writing in a solid essay format.
A strong argument essay structure can be split up into 4 paragraphs, each containing 4 sentences (except the conclusion paragraph, which only contains 3 sentences).
Stick to this essay structure:
- Paragraph 1 - Introduction
- Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
- Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
- Paragraph 4 - Conclusion