In many countries, a small number of people earn extremely high salaries. Some people believe that this is good for the country, but others think that governments should not allow salaries above a certain level. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
All over the world, a tiny group of
people
make high financial gains. Use synonyms
While
a part of Linking Words
society
thinks Use synonyms
this
is necessary, others feel that the government should limit it to a certain ceiling. Linking Words
Jobs
in areas Use synonyms
such
as public service, banking and advertising are generally better paid. Some Linking Words
people
would point out that these Use synonyms
jobs
are essential for Use synonyms
society
, and, as those positions are usually filled with the best Use synonyms
people
, with good curriculums, Use synonyms
also
they should be well recompensed. It is said that Linking Words
people
with good skills have spent enormous effort and money on education and should be fairly rewarded. Use synonyms
On the other hand
, there are those who say high salaries do not mean that high values are been delivered to Linking Words
society
, and there should be some regulation to apply some ceiling to remunerations. I agree with Use synonyms
this
statement because we have many Linking Words
jobs
that are essential to our Use synonyms
society
and that Use synonyms
delivers
good value to it. Correct subject-verb agreement
deliver
Although
the Linking Words
high paid
positions are usually occupied by Add a hyphen
high-paid
well skilled
persons, that does not mean Add a hyphen
well-skilled
society
will Use synonyms
be benefiting
from those work. Related to Wrong verb form
benefit
this
, we can mention the 2008 subprime crisis, which Linking Words
origin was
in the heart of the financial system, where CEOs, analysts and consultants were paid millionaires wages, and still they led the economy to a very bad situation with millions of unemployed Correct your spelling
originated
people
. In summary, we are living in a Use synonyms
society
where a small number of workers take home huge amounts of money, and there are those who agree with Use synonyms
this
situation. Linking Words
However
, governments should apply some limit to remuneration because Linking Words
high paid
Add a hyphen
high-paid
jobs
Use synonyms
does
not mean high value delivered to Change the verb form
do
society
.Use synonyms
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