Many jobs that used to be done by humans are now being done by machines. Does this development bring more advantages or disadvantages?

Over the

last

two or three decades, technology has been

occuping

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occupying

every place due to speed and less human work. In the

past

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countless works were done by humans but nowadays

this

trend is completely changed due to

the

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technology, everywhere is being done

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by

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my

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machines

instead

of men. In my opinion about

this

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this

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trend has more drawbacks

b ecause

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because

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of increasing

unemployment

and crime rate increase.

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essay discusses briefly

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the following reasons.

To begin

with, after the invention of

industrial

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the industrial

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revoultion

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revolution

,

machineries

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machinery

types of machinery

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have been used

many

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corporate

companies

instead

of people,

thus

,

this

can create more

unemployment

among the population.

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,

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India has been facing

unemployment

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crisis since

companies

were using

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a machine

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machine

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machines

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instead

of folks.

Thus

,

coutless

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countless

people do not have any job in order to they face poverty and scarcity.

In addition

,

this

progress affects human employment

opportunity

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tremendously among the

younsters

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youngsters

.

Hence

,

machine

replace

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of

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human it

is bring

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more drawbacks.

Moreover

,

this

process brings more negatives using of an automatic

machine

than

woman

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can affect society

negtively

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negatively

such

as crime, antisocial activities,

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, in Indian folks are faced many crimes day-to-day by

idle

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an idle

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person which means who does not have any work while he thinks negatively like

thieft

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theft

, murder and

unemployment

and poverty is the main reason for

this

.

Furthermore

, one

machine

can be worked a hundred employees affect directly by

an innovative machines

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innovative machines

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.

Therefore

,

this

advancement process

bring

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more disadvantages. To conclude, cutting-edge can be reduced the population workforce in many

companies

. Using

of

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heavy

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the heavy

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machine

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machines

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can bring more negatives like employment ratio increases and

this

can lead to affecting

society

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the society

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negatively. I hope the employers might be

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more human workforce than machinery in their

companies

.