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Some people believe that the experiences children have before they go to school will have the greatest effect on their future life. Others argue that experiences gained when they are teenagers have a bigger influence. Discuss both views and give your own opinions.

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 agree with both the statements
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 since the experience and learning
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 and atmosphere around the child during their childhood.But
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 depends on case to case and parenthood. The behaviour of parents and the people around the children will mainly impact the
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 ability skill and in the stage of
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 ,they will be very
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 about the outside world,to experience the new things which they are seeing in and around them. As of my
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 children will follow what they see not what they listen, at that stage parenthood will make vital role on the behaviour of the children and in the teenage
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 they learn from
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, friends, teachers, relatives or through social media and try to behave like the same.So taking care of both stages is
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 and vital.
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