Too much attention is paid to and too much money is spent on keeping pets, while people throughout the world are starving. Discuss the arguments for and against keeping pets. To what extent do you agree?
At the present time, many
people
have pets
and there are more kinds of pet
available in the market than in the past. Fix the agreement mistake
pets
However
, someone may claim that raising pets
is waste
of money and time. The money spent for them should be donated to the poor who can not find even their meals. From my perspective, there are both advantages and disadvantages Correct article usage
a waste
in
keeping Change preposition
to
animals
. For some people
, pets
can bring great benefits to
Change preposition
apply
them
. In my case, if it is not necessary, I prefer not to keep Correct pronoun usage
apply
pets
in my house.
Many people
love to have pets
because they can bring happiness to their families. For example
, most of
Change preposition
apply
people
feel Add an article
the people
relax
and may show less aggressive Wrong verb form
relaxed
behaviors
when they have Change the spelling
behaviours
pets
, especially, dogs, which most of them are friendly. Moreover
, some people
may need pets
because of necessity. For instance
, disabled people
such
as the blind may need a guide dog. Elderly people
who live alone may need pets
to reduce their loneliness. Nevertheless
, the disadvantages are also
obvious that there are extra costs and time for raising them. On top at
that, Change preposition
of
animals
can bring dangerous diseases and harm their owners. For examples
, some kinds of dogs bite children because of unclear reasons. Fix the agreement mistake
example
In addition
, pets
can disturb people
in houses or their neighbors
too Change the spelling
neighbours
for example
when they make noises at night.
In my opinion, raising animals
is suitable only for someone. As I mention above, disabled people
, elderly people
and some families need pets
because they can fulfill
the gap in their lives. Change the spelling
fulfil
However
, although
their advantages are great, the drawbacks of having them are also
needed to be considered. The increasing risks when people
keep them such
as diseases, injuries and disturbances can destroy lives or relationship
. Fix the agreement mistake
relationships
Then
, there are enough reasons for ordinary people
including me to not have pets
.
In conclusion, for most of
Change preposition
apply
people
, there Add an article
the people
are
more harm than good to raise Change the verb form
is
animals
but there may be an exception for someone who really need
their help.Change the verb form
needs
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