Some people seek a lot of advice from family and friends when choosing their career. Others feel it is better to choose a career more independently. Discuss both views and give your opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience
Nowadays, some people
searching
for advice during choosing their Wrong verb form
search
future
career. Others, better take a look for their own knowledge. However
, personally, I think that is
better to use your experience and choose Add an article
a satisfied
the satisfied
satisfied
job. Replace the word
satisfying
This
essay will emphasize why is better to keep your own point of view, but also
will consider Correct your spelling
advice
advices
from other Change the wording
advice
pieces of advice
bits of advice
peoples
.
On the one hand, Fix the agreement mistake
people
peoples
those
have their own opinion are usually more successful in life, Correct pronoun usage
who
then
peoples
Fix the agreement mistake
people
those
listen to someone guidance. Because, when humans Correct pronoun usage
who
choosing
their Wrong verb form
choose
future
workplace, they should regard only their own opinion. For instance
, my friend Oleg usually make a decision independently, but he can also
consider someone else opinion. In fact, he obviously reached a
success in Remove the article
apply
IT
sphere. Correct article usage
the IT
Hence
, nobody exactly knew what is better for each person. In this
situation is better to have own
point of view, because Correct pronoun usage
your own
choice
Replace the word
choosing
such
a future
career considering, might influence on rest of life
. Correct pronoun usage
your life
Then
, everybody should definitely choose their own option.
On the other hand
, if advice
Add an article
the advice
given
from the older person, that has already gone the same way. Add a missing verb
is given
Then
it will be not unnecessary to follow some Correct your spelling
advice
advices
. Change the wording
advice
pieces of advice
bits of advice
For example
, my uncle Andrew has no idea about future
career. And he Correct pronoun usage
his future
was ask
Change the verb form
asked
him
father for guidance, what is better to Correct pronoun usage
his
chose
, what is better to leave. His father was like Change the verb
choose
role
model to him, and he has Add an article
a role
Correct your spelling
advises
advices
Andrew to choose the same way - medicine. After a while, Andrew became Change the wording
advice
pieces of advice
bits of advice
second
to none doctor. Thus
, this
story teaches that its
not always unnecessary to Replace the word
it's
it is
listen
advice from Add the preposition
tolisten
the
other Correct article usage
apply
peoples
.
To conclude, I believe that before selecting a Fix the agreement mistake
people
future
position, humans do it because of their own flavor
, no matter what is crowd suggest Change the spelling
flavour
them
. But each person should think about Change preposition
to them
Correct article usage
the other
other
side.Change the wording
another
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