Environment pollution is too alarming to be managed by individuals. Real change can be made at the government level. What extent do you agree or disagree?

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It has been said that

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the actual protection for the globe can be done only by the authority, as atmospheric impurity has been reached at

alarming

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rate and cannot be

handle

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by the inhabitants.I, totally disagree, with

this

notion that only the regime can combat with

this

problem.In upcoming paragraphs, I will discuss my viewpoints with relevant examples.

To begin

with, it is true that

the

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environmental pollution has been increased at

peak

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, which is now hard to

dealt

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by people. To make the

environment

eco-friendly relevant steps can be taken only by the ministry.

First

of all, the

governmant

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government

has been already done a lot to save our planet. To cite an example, the Air Act 1974, the Water Act 1981, the

Environment

Protection Act 1986

such

laws were

impelemented

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implemented

by the regime. But the reason is, we the dwellers of

this

planet had not

took

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these laws seriously to save our ecosystem.

Hence

still

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we have time to save it, by taking the solutions

seriuosly

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seriously

Moreover

, we, the inhabitants take a lot of benefits from

this

planet "the earth", but in

opposite

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we are playing with beauty and nature by cutting forests, by digging mines at different places, by using transports, which emits

harmfull

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harmful

gasses. So, if we are doing these things, it is

also

our duty to make it clean and safe.

For instance

, we visit any beach or hill station, there are many dustbins for

rubbish

, but many inhabitants throw the

rubbish

on road

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or on ground and others,

however

after watching that, start throwing

rubbish

near there,

instead

of in the bins. It indicates we follow others, and if any person throw that

rubbish

bin

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by taking it from ground or floor, other will feel shame and will avoid

to do

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the same thing again.

As a result

, if the government is doing something to save

environment

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the environment

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, ahead, it is our responsibility to follow the rules

imlemented

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implemented

by the regime. In conclusion, it has been noticed that

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the government already doing a lot for our

environment

, but it's

also

our duty to make it safe and clean for our upcoming generation.we cannot leave everything on the authority, to save our globe from pollution we all should take steps together.

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