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Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of society.Others,however,believe that school is the place to learn this. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

#people #parents #children #members #society #school #place
It is often argued that
parents
 are the main factors that have to teach their
children
 the ways of being good for
society
,whilst others think that it is on schools to prepare
children
.They are reasons that made
parents
 involved in
this
 case,but in my opinion,I think schools play the key role. On one hand,the effects of families on their
children
's behaviour
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 undeniable.Due to some moral issues that
children
 inherit from
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they
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the
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parents
,they reflect the vibes that were
transfered
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transferred
 from their
parents
 to them in
the
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society
.They witness that how their
parents
 talk or act with each other and learn them,no matter that even if they are right or wrong.
For example
,if the atmosphere of a home is
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with
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 violence and conflict,the
children
 of that family become aggressive.
This
 statement is proven about almost 80% of the whole
society
.But it does not mean that
children
 always follow
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parents
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 footsteps.
On the other hand
,
children
 spend most of their time at school with their teachers and other students.Educational schemes could be
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very
 effective on childrens' future role in
society
.If they learn the factors of being a good member
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society
,which need many years of
practicing
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 and being in touch with the environment,they can easily execute it.
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Additionally
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,
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 peer interaction should never be underestimated.When
childen
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children
 learn how to be
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good
member
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in
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society
,they interact
whith
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with
 other students and can make some admiring roles for themselves,or
conversely
,they could recognise negative points and avoid them. To sum up,both of these factors,
parents
 and schools,are associated in the
proccess
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process
 of becoming a good member
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society
 for a child.
Parents
 are
first
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 inspirations in
children
's
life
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,but the knowledge that they will learn while studying at school can shape their character and their future roles in
society
.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • good members of society
  • teach
  • parents
  • schools
  • responsibility
  • values
  • respect
  • empathy
  • responsibility
  • formal education
  • citizenship
  • ethics
  • social responsibility
  • lead by example
  • role models
  • conducive environment
  • extracurricular activities
  • community involvement
  • collaborate
  • holistic approach
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