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Men are placed in the most high-level jobs. some people say that the government should encourage a certain percentage of these jobs to be reserved for women do you agree or disagree?

#men #jobs #people #government #percentage #women
I was very excited to see your posting for the Application for
“Cost
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 Manager/
Quantity
 Surveyor/Cost Engineer” position at WSP. I have been working in the
Quantity
 Surveying field for 9 years, and during that time I have been a part of multiple
projects
, including ones that focused on
the
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Residential project, Commercial Building and Interior
work related
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. I am particularly
detail oriented
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, and I have always been praised for my ability to foresee potential problems and make proactive plans. In my previous role as
Quantity
 Surveyor in several companies, I was responsible for examining the site progress, preparation of bill of quantities, measurement work, contract administration and several activities that
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 to my field. I am
also
 attentive to the criticism of others, and I highly value
feedback
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 that will make my
projects
 run more smoothly. I appreciate straightforward yet relaxed professional interactions, and I aim for that dynamic with all of my colleagues and outside contacts. I sincerely look forward to
further
 discussing the role of
Quantity
 Surveyor at WSP. I'm
also
 excited to hear more about some of the
projects
 that WSP has been involved in as well as any
projects
 in the foreseeable future. I appreciate your time in considering me for
this
 position.
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