Children today play very violent games. This must be the reason for the increase in violence and crime in most major cities of the world. What are your opinions on this?

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play a vital role in our child's routine. The question is, the violent

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are the reason for the increasing number of crimes in the most important cities around the world? In

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when they play aggressive

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promote the

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to enhance their way of thinking. To illustrate, if a person plays

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and he/she tries to find solutions to the

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, it will promote the brand to be more creative.

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, the cells of the brain will be trained to act effectively under pressure.

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, concern with the

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result in a criminal act.

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's behaviour.

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, people have aged less than 15 years old tend to imitate other people particularly if it is aggressive.

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, playing

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several times, especially if they playing video

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, just sitting in front of the TV. In conclusion,

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the benefit that comes from violent

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, disadvantages

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than the advantages. In my point of view, I believe that the number of crimes increased due to somewhat aggressive

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for

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