The graphs give information about average house prices in England and other parts of the world.

The graphs give information about average house prices in England and other parts of the world.
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The first bar graph compares the average expense
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housing in England and
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London
between 1995 and 2013,
while
the
second
chart demonstrates estate expenditure in other parts of the country.
Overall
,
it is clear that
London
is the most exorbitant place to settle down in England.
In contrast
, Midlands and North East provide the most affordable housing. Looking at the first graph,
house
costs in
London
were consistently higher than that in its mother country.
In addition
, the price for an average
house
in the capital raised rapidly, starting at 200000
euro
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in 1995 and in 2013 it
had
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exceeded 400000 euro.
In other words
,
house
cost
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costs
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in
London
had more than doubled after the 18-year period Meanwhile, housing bills were relatively lower in other regions of England. Sorted by descending order of
house
prices, we have
London
, South East, South Weast, North West, Midlands and North East. In 2013, an average
house
in North East and Midlands
costed
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around 10000 and 12000
euro
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, respectively. These figures were only
approximate
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to
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one-fourth of estate prices in
London
in the same year.
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