The maps show Southside, a shopping mall, as it is now, and plans for its development. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The maps show Southside, a shopping mall, as it is now, and plans for its development. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The maps demonstrate the shopping
mall
Southside in its current form and its possible changes in the future.
Overall
,
it is clear that
the plan is to extend the shopping
centre
and its car
park
into the nearby green zone to allow more space for stores and fashion boutiques at the expense of space for activities and eateries. Currently, Southside
mall
consists of a supermarket, department store, cinemas, a noodle shop, café, children`s play area and toilet facilities. To the east of the
centre
, there is a golf course that backs onto a
park
,
meanwhile
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to the south there is a fitness
centre
and a car
park
opposite the
mall
entrance.
According to
the proposed plan, only the supermarket, toilets and entrance will remain
from
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the original site. The most significant development will be the extension of the
mall
in an easterly direction, where it will overtake the land previously occupied by the
park
and golf course. The fitness
centre
will be demolished and,
as a result
, the car
park
will more than double in size. Inside the
mall
itself, the proposed renovation suggests that the department store will remain, increasing in size and acquiring its own entrance, and stores, including fashion boutiques and shoe stores, will obtain more space.
Moreover
, a cosmetic and gift shop will be added,
as well as
a beauty salon. There will,
however
, be nowhere to eat since the café will be replaced by an information
centre
.
To sum up
, the proposed changes will make the shopping
mall
Southside larger and more people will have
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option to spend their spare time there.
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