The maps show Southside, a shopping mall, as it is now, and plans for its development. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

IELTS Writing Task Chart for The maps show Southside, a shopping mall, as it is now, and plans for its development. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The maps demonstrate the shopping

mall

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Southside in its current form and its possible changes in the future.

Overall

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it is clear that

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the plan is to extend the shopping

centre

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and its car

park

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into the nearby green zone to allow more space for stores and fashion boutiques at the expense of space for activities and eateries. Currently, Southside

mall

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consists of a supermarket, department store, cinemas, a noodle shop, café, children`s play area and toilet facilities. To the east of the

centre

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, there is a golf course that backs onto a

park

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meanwhile

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to the south there is a fitness

centre

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and a car

park

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opposite the

mall

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entrance.

According to

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the proposed plan, only the supermarket, toilets and entrance will remain

from

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the original site. The most significant development will be the extension of the

mall

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in an easterly direction, where it will overtake the land previously occupied by the

park

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and golf course. The fitness

centre

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will be demolished and,

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, the car

park

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will more than double in size. Inside the

mall

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itself, the proposed renovation suggests that the department store will remain, increasing in size and acquiring its own entrance, and stores, including fashion boutiques and shoe stores, will obtain more space.

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, a cosmetic and gift shop will be added,

as well as

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a beauty salon. There will,

however

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, be nowhere to eat since the café will be replaced by an information

centre

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To sum up

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, the proposed changes will make the shopping

mall

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Southside larger and more people will have

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option to spend their spare time there.

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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words mall, centre, park with synonyms.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

5 paragraphs

268 words

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