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In some countries children have very strict rules of behaviour, while in other countries they are allowed to do almost anything they want. To what extent should children have to follow rules?

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Rules and regulations are meant for
children
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 to teach them to behave in a good manner. Some people are very strict with their
kids
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 while others tackle it
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differently
 by letting them do as per their wish.
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belive
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 that strictness will make
children
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 more rebellious. A few countries, where
parents
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rasied
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raised
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 their
children
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strict rules to tell them what not to do and what is
right
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 thing to do.
Parents
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 think that being strict from their childhood will teach them moral values and it will help make their future better.
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, if a child
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doesn't
 follow what his mother is
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saying
, she will try to punish him by
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slapping
 or yelling
on
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 a kid and thinks that
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this
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 before disobeying her.
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,
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 threatening a young child works, it is not a good way to tell them how to behave or abstain
them
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from doing something wrong. Most
indian
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parents
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 keep their
kids
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 in a box with certain mentality and thoughts. While on other hand, people are treating their
children
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 with no pressure and
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 them do whatever they want. As per their thinking, if you keep nagging your
kids
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, it will make them either stubborn or rebellious.
No-one
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 likes to be told what to do and what not to do all the time, be it a child or
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 adult. At
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 very young age, they are curious about knowing the world and different things, so without realizing what is good or bad they just react or behave
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.
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, it is
parents
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'
responsibilty
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responsibility
 how they convey their message to the
kids
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not to repeat the mistake. It
doesnt
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doesn't
 mean that it should be
harsh
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 way only.
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, if one's son commit
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 mistake of answering back and his guardian
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 to teach him a lesson, he can make him understand and even though he did it again, keep him in a corner for a while so that he
realize
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 his mistake. In conclusion, being
shrude
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rude
 to the
kids
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 will not make them behave nicely. So it is rather to tell them politely.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • upbringing
  • discipline
  • autonomy
  • safety
  • responsibility
  • creativity
  • critical thinking
  • independence
  • boundaries
  • rebellion
  • holistic development
  • structure
  • nurturing environment
  • behavioral expectations
  • social norms
  • authority
  • decision-making skills
  • consequences
  • respect
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