In some countries children have very strict rules of behaviour, while in other countries they are allowed to do almost anything they want. To what extent should children have to follow rules?

Rules and regulations are meant for
children
to teach them to behave in a good manner. Some people are very strict with their
kids
while others tackle it
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differently
by letting them do as per their wish.
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that strictness will make
children
more rebellious. A few countries, where
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children
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strict rules to tell them what not to do and what is
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thing to do.
Parents
think that being strict from their childhood will teach them moral values and it will help make their future better.
For instance
, if a child
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follow what his mother is
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saying
, she will try to punish him by
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a kid and thinks that
next
time he will remember
this
before disobeying her.
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threatening a young child works, it is not a good way to tell them how to behave or abstain
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from doing something wrong. Most
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parents
keep their
kids
in a box with certain mentality and thoughts. While on other hand, people are treating their
children
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them do whatever they want. As per their thinking, if you keep nagging your
kids
, it will make them either stubborn or rebellious.
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likes to be told what to do and what not to do all the time, be it a child or
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adult. At
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very young age, they are curious about knowing the world and different things, so without realizing what is good or bad they just react or behave
accordingly
.
Nonetheless
, it is
parents
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how they convey their message to the
kids
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not to repeat the mistake. It
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mean that it should be
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way only.
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mistake of answering back and his guardian
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to teach him a lesson, he can make him understand and even though he did it again, keep him in a corner for a while so that he
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his mistake. In conclusion, being
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rude
to the
kids
will not make them behave nicely. So it is rather to tell them politely.
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  • upbringing
  • discipline
  • autonomy
  • safety
  • responsibility
  • creativity
  • critical thinking
  • independence
  • boundaries
  • rebellion
  • holistic development
  • structure
  • nurturing environment
  • behavioral expectations
  • social norms
  • authority
  • decision-making skills
  • consequences
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