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Many people today find it difficult to balance the demands of their work and personal life. What are the causes of this situation, and what can individuals and employers do to reduce the problem?

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Nowadays, the struggle of keeping work and personal
life
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 becomes
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obvious
 for many humans. There are multiple reasons for that, but
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ways to minimize the problem exist.
To begin
 with, it is necessary to mention the notorious contribution to the issue caused by employers. Since
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income is the cornerstone of any business, it should keep blooming by any possible means. Consecutively, the personal
life
 of employees is a matter of the least concern for an
enternprineur
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entrepreneur
 and can be sacrificed in the pursuit of achieving new financial heights. The possible way out is the
strenghtening
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strengthening
 of the workers, foundation and following
regural
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regular
 assembly of labourers
committe
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committee
committed
 limiting the possibility of a company owner to capitalise on behalf of his workers.
Secondly
, people should realise they are the only masters of themselves. The constant concessions in the name of
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 own profit are obviously harmful
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 the family
life
 of a common labourer.
However
, it is crucial to mention the importance of having a stable income source for a family.
Hence
 the worker in some cases is left with no choice rather than opt for any alterations of working conditions induced by the company, and as
life
 proves, mostly these changes are not for good.
Nonetheless
, the solution clearly exists and its
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implementation
 is relatively simple. Just let the company keep the labour codex, provide employees with paid vacations, not
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force them to attend the workplace on weekends, keep the good old nine-to-five approach alive. To illustrate, you can hardly find a person today not aware of
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the
 infamous
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 996 work culture. The mere insanity of people justifying it and protecting recalls nothing but disgust. In conclusion, keeping all in balance is crucial for own full
life
 and peace. The equilibrium between work and family
life
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great concern for most in modern society and there are multiple reasons causing the disturbance,
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although
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