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People nowadays tend to have children at older ages. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

#people #children #ages #outweigh
Recently many
of
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couples
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 decided to have
child
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in
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 older ages. Older parents have more
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to
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 raising a baby but there is a strong likelihood that a good relationship between them in
childhood
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 period will not
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 established. I will discuss both advantages and disadvantages of the issue in
this
 essay. Having
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child
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ages
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 has some noticeable benefits for the family. Couples usually delay their parenthoods to make stable their economic and social positions in order to have a better lifestyle and to prepare more facilities for their
children
 in the future. It is a fact that
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 individuals can progress in their carrier and grab the opportunities before
entrance
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 of
children
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 their life. As another benefit, experienced parents have a significant effect on
children
’s
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. To illustrate, a 30 years old woman most of the time has more knowledge in
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 care of an infant in comparison to a 20 years old woman and of
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this
 is not a certainty. Nobody
cannot
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 ignore the problems of late parenting. There is a lot of risks in late pregnancy which threaten both mother’s and
infant’s
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 health.
For instance
, being pregnant after age 35 makes certain complications more likely, including premature birth defects and getting pregnant with multiples.
In
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 the aged parents will probably not
able
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 to create
strong
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 emotional
relationship
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 with their
children
, they do not have enough energy to play with them. In conclusion,
although
, late parenting has some hurdles
such
 as, late pregnancy problems and relationship issues, it has benefits like, having
higher
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 financial position and more awareness in educating the
children
 which outweigh the disadvantages.
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