children today play very violent games. this must be the reason for the increase in violence and crime in most major cities of the world. what are your opinions on this?
There is no doubt that these days video
games
are becoming common and play a considerable role in children
's routine. The question is, are violent games
the reason in increase
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crime
and violence
in the most important and greatest of world cities? In this
essay, I am going to discuss this
issue and draw my own conclusion.
In terms of some views, most people, and among them is me, strongly believe it is too much to say that aggressive video games
are the cause of increased crime
in the world. The main reason given to support this
claim is that looking at the past centuries there have been a lot of constant wars and fighting with weapons and a lot of dangerous tools. To illustrate, those previous years for mankind show that training children
on the real killing and fighting is
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children
's character and ability to protect themselves from enemies or enemies of the homeland. In contrast
, most children
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violence
and it can not be children
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crime
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However
, on the other hand
, concern about games
violence
leads to criminal acts. Firstly
, there is no doubt that violent games
have impact
on kids' behaviour. In the other words, Add an article
an impact
the
people who their age under 15 years old tend to imitate other persons especially if it is aggressive. Correct article usage
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secondly
, playing games
that promote violence
, result in children
being introverted. This
is because they play it several times and particularly when they play video games
, they just sit in front of the TV for a long time and without doing anything else useful.
In conclusion, although
playing violent games
have unbelievable influences, it has many boons as well. Therefore
, I believe that the rise of brutality and crime
is not related of
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's games
, and there are other root causes that should be investigated.Submitted by besho0h on
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