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The growing number of overweight people is putting a strain on the helth care system in an effort to deal with the health issues involved. Some people think that the best way to deal with this problem to introduce more physical education lesson in the school curriculem. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

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Because the
increase
 in the number of the overweight population put a lot of pressure on the healthcare system when going to handle the related issues with it. According to some, overcoming
this
 issue is the best
way
 to include physical activity lessons in
school
 education.I strongly agreed that
this
 is the best
way
 to tackle
this
 problem to avoid the unnecessary weight on the public
health
 system.
Firstly
, to deal with the issues surrounding overweight and obesity is the long-lasting
way
 is introduce more sport and
activities
 during
school
time
.
This
 will ensure to eliminate the
health
 matters related to obesity from the future generation.On average the children in The USA have only two hours of activity
time
 during
school
 hours.
This
 will not be enough to counteract their sedentary lifestyle. In
further
, need to
increase
 the extracurricular
activities
 in the curriculum.
Secondly
, With ,
increase
 the sports
activities
 in the
school
time
 children will get more active and playful. At ,home their parents will involve with them to do the
activities
.
In other words
, children will be extended the physical
activities
 to the home and their parents and encourage them to stay active. Undoubtedly It will
increase
 elders activity
time
 and improve their
health
. In conclusion, adding extracurricular
activities
 to the
school
 curriculum will be the best
way
 to reduce the pressure on the
health
 system owning to the growth of the overweight population.
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