School should not force students who do not have natural ability for learning foreign language to study other language at school. To what extent do you agree or disagree

It is argued that
children
should not be
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to study a foreign
language
at school.
Although
I believe that learning another
language
is important, I completely
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agree
argue
that
children
should be encouraged to learn a foreign
language
, not to be forced to learn it. On the one hand, it is undeniable that learning other
languages
is very useful for
children
. Knowing different
language
help
children
have better chances
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studying and working in the future.
For example
,
th
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the
most important
textbook
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textbooks
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and journals now are in English so Vietnamese students who are good at English may access
to
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these materials easier, leading to a better result of studying. Fluence in many
languages
is
also
a benefit when people
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for a job.
In addition
, learning other
languages
help
children
understand more about different traditions and cultures, which may encourage mutual understanding between people in different nations and promote
the
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globalisation.
On the other hand
,
children
should not be forced to study a foreign
language
because of many reasons.
Firstly
, learning under the pressure does not lead to a good result of studying
to
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children
. In
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children
who have to learn what they do not like may not only feel
stressful
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but
also
lose their passion and motivation in studying
languages
and other subjects as well.
Secondly
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some
children
do not have a natural ability to learn
languages
,
instead
, they are very good at other areas
such
as
scienes
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sciences
science
or art.
Such
children
shoud
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should
be encouraged to study what they are good at in order to have better development,
instead
of being forced to learn what they are unable to do. In conclusion, I believe that learning a foreign
language
is important but it should be considered as an optional subject, not as a compulsory subject for
children
.
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