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In the modern world today the rate of divorce is rising dramatically in most societies. What are the main reasons for getting divorced? What can be done to solve the issue?

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Nowadays dissolution between people is increasing in many countries, especially during the quarantine due to high demand from society participants. There are several major causes
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 lead to
this
 situation. Fortunately,
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 is dramatically going up, there are ways where family separation issues can be solved. The subject has
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further
.
First
 of all, the main reason
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 divorce is that people now do not afraid to tell what they want and what they feel.
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,
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 ago the normal situation in Kazakhstan was that newlyweds have to live with
parents
 of male, and
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 has no right to see her
parents
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 the
first
 year.
This
 led to that girls had a huge pressure, with new family rules and newborn on the hand.
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, adults influenced by the movies choose their partner not just because of his nature, but because of person’s financial ability, status and
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beautifulness. To be more precise, when they get married and start to live together, they are showing their true nature and understand that made
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.
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, while Coronavirus made people live locked in their houses and spend time together, they become to know each other much better than before, and it is resulted in raising
divorce
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 rate in Japan
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 67%. Fortunately, there are several things that can be done to cure these problems.
Firstly
, when becoming a family, man
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 to inform his
parents
 that he will live with his family, that he will be independent and responsible. Being only by your own family resolves a lot of
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 solution is
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active propaganda from the government and
parents
 to youngest, that they should not judge by some criteria, as choosing a partner should be for
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, till the end of life. To conclude, it is evident that there
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lot of
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causes of divorces between married couples, but all the causes have solutions and alternatives.
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