Motorways help people travel quickly and cover long distances but they also cause problems. What are the problems of motorways and what solutions are there?
Motorways bring many benefits to the citizenry and commute faster in
the
wide range of areas. Correct article usage
a
However
, it comes with certain disadvantages. This
essay will list out some issues related to highway
and suggest some ways to Fix the agreement mistake
highways
overcome
.
Motorways confer numerous negative effects. Correct pronoun usage
themovercome
This
is because when people
travel quickly, it leads to car
accidents and fatal damages. For example
, there was a notorious car
accident in the US in 1990 which
there was traffic jams and Change preposition
in which
delayed
for weeks. It was really terrible and impact on Replace the word
delays
humans
life. If governments spent more on building bridges, drivers wouldn't dependent on expressways. Replace the word
human
As a result
, citizens call for a demand to augment the current problems.
There are several solutions that can be taken to minimize these issues. It can be install
speed limit or reduce the traffic lights on highways. Wrong verb form
installed
For instance
, an expressway from Hai Phong to Ha Noi in Viet Nam have applied the policy of cutting traffics. And since then
car
accidents have decreased amazingly. Moreover
, governments should tax car
and road user
heavily. Fix the agreement mistake
users
This
tax will be used to fix and construct bridges and roads. Therefore
, people
will have short bridges or wide roads to commute and be prevented from car
accidents. This
needs to be tackle
earlier so that Wrong verb form
tackled
motorwayers
can have Correct your spelling
motorways
motorway
a safe travel
.
In conclusion, motorways will lead to some unwanted impacts mentioned above, but there are some solutions Remove the article
safe travel
a safe journey
a safe trip
such
as limiting speed, cutting traffics,... can solve the negative points. People
should raise their awareness and focus on driving carefully. In my opinion, i
think governments should take care Change the capitalization
I
citizen
life, especially the highways travelling. Change preposition
of citizen
In addition
, people
need to raise their awareness and focus on driving carefully which protecting
themselves.Wrong verb form
protects
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