Some people believe that visitors to other countries should follow local customs and behavior. Others disagree and think that the host country should welcome cultural differences. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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In an era of globalization, were international travelling play a prominent role. Few believe that tourists travelling to other
nations
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must respect and follow the traditions and behaviour of native
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of that country.
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, in the opinion of some populations, a nation should respect the culture and religion of travellers visiting their country. I will discuss both statements in
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essay thereby giving my opinion. To start with, many travellers visit other
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for
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period, which might have a personal or official reason.
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, they should respect the customs and traditions of native
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, which may include ways of greeting
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, time punctuality eating habits etc.
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way visitors will gain confidence and praise
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locals.
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,
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will
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make their stay convenient. Not only
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will make them comfortable with native
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but
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help in executing their purpose for visiting that nation. On the flip side, some
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have contrary views on the
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statement. According to them, the country should be open to accepting different
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trades and customs.
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will help the host region to attract more tourists across the globe, which will result
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higher revenue from the tourism business.
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will help these
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to improve their infrastructure and economy as a whole. For
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example, there are many countries whose major source of revenue for tourism.
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,
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helps to attract talents from other countries.
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, countries can develop themselves by accepting immigrants from other
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. to conclude, both the
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has their supporters, but in my opinion.
nations
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having the intention to present themselves on the global platform should be open to accepting
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cultures and trade from a different religion.
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