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Some people believe that visitors to other countries should follow local customs and behavior. Others disagree and think that the host country should welcome cultural differences. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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In an era of globalization, were international travelling play a prominent role. Few believe that tourists travelling to other
nations
 must respect and follow the traditions and behaviour of native
people
 of that country.
On the other hand
, in the opinion of some populations, a nation should respect the culture and religion of travellers visiting their country. I will discuss both statements in
this
 essay thereby giving my opinion. To start with, many travellers visit other
nations
 for
certain
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 period, which might have a personal or official reason.
Hence
, they should respect the customs and traditions of native
people
, which may include ways of greeting
people
, time punctuality eating habits etc.
This
 way visitors will gain confidence and praise
for
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 locals.
Additionally
,
this
 will
also
 make their stay convenient. Not only
this
 will make them comfortable with native
people
 but
also
 help in executing their purpose for visiting that nation. On the flip side, some
people
 have contrary views on the
first
 statement. According to them, the country should be open to accepting different
religion's
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religions'
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 trades and customs.
As
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this
 will help the host region to attract more tourists across the globe, which will result
is
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in
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 higher revenue from the tourism business.
This
 will help these
nations
 to improve their infrastructure and economy as a whole. For
an
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example, there are many countries whose major source of revenue for tourism.
Furthermore
,
this
also
 helps to attract talents from other countries.
As a result
, countries can develop themselves by accepting immigrants from other
nations
. to conclude, both the
statement
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 has their supporters, but in my opinion.
nations
 having the intention to present themselves on the global platform should be open to accepting
people
 cultures and trade from a different religion.
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