Some companies have uniforms for the staff which must be work at all times. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this.

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is mandatory in some institutions, factories,
enterprises
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and enterprises
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for the employees.
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the positive sides of wearing uniforms which
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the negative sides. In my concern,
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clothing reduces discrimination among
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the working
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class and
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for
profession
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the profession
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.
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is an identical mark of some companies for their staff as they promote their logo through
dresses
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the dresses
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of
workforce
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the workforce
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. Through
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clothing,
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the management divides their workers into different
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and
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to recognize them easily. It creates a zoon of comfort among co-workers, which
prevent
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show-off of dressing sense, wealth, branding and so on.
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master,
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and who
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is
manager
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a manager
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with the help of their
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, because they have formal
instruction
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for
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.
In addition
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, the
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gives a sense of equality, which
keep
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keeps
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the working environment peaceful.
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, there are some disadvantages
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, people
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are not comfortable with
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the dress
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, if they do not like
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of the
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or if they want to keep it as
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, where are they working.
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, Mankind need to keep an extra uniform for emergency need, like dirty
cloth
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clothes
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. For illustration, a restaurant waiter
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one more cloth ready in case
if
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of
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any incident
spoil
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the cloth through food or weast.
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, there are drawbacks
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same
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clothing, in my opinion, the blessing
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the
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sides of it.
To
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conclusion, uniform is identical and must
ware
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for
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some companies, which have
much advantage
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than
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disadvantages. Even though some of the
humens
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humans
may not like to agree with it; it should be a
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must-wear
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for showing equal respect to each other.
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