Some companies have uniforms for the staff which must be work at all times. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this.
Use synonyms
Dress-code
is mandatory in some institutions, factories, Correct your spelling
Dress code
enterprises
for the employees. Correct word choice
and enterprises
This
essay will discuss Linking Words
for
the positive sides of wearing uniforms which Change preposition
apply
overweigh
the negative sides. In my concern, Verb problem
outweigh
same
clothing reduces discrimination among Correct article usage
the same
working
class and Add an article
the working
important
for Add a missing verb
is important
profession
. Add an article
the profession
Use synonyms
Dress-code
is an identical mark of some companies for their staff as they promote their logo through Correct your spelling
Dress code
dresses
of Correct article usage
the dresses
workforce
. Through Add an article
the workforce
clothing
the management divides their workers into different Add a comma
clothing,
post
and Fix the agreement mistake
posts
position
to recognize them easily. It creates a zoon of comfort among co-workers, which Fix the agreement mistake
positions
prevent
show-off of dressing sense, wealth, branding and so on. Correct subject-verb agreement
prevents
For example
, if we see the RGM sector in Bangladesh, we easily can identify who is Linking Words
cutting
master, Correct article usage
a cutting
who
is Correct word choice
and who
manager
with the help of their Add an article
a manager
the manager
dress
, because they have formal Use synonyms
instruction
for Fix the agreement mistake
instructions
dress
. Use synonyms
In addition
, the Linking Words
Use synonyms
dress-code
gives a sense of equality, whichCorrect your spelling
dress code
keep
the working environment peaceful. Correct subject-verb agreement
keeps
On the other hand
, there are some disadvantages Linking Words
also
, people Linking Words
sometime
are not comfortable with Replace the word
sometimes
Use synonyms
dress
, if they do not like Add an article
the dress
a dress
color
of the Add an article
the color
dress
or if they want to keep it as Use synonyms
secrete
, where are they working. Replace the word
secret
Furthermore
, Mankind need to keep an extra uniform for emergency need, like dirty Linking Words
cloth
. For illustration, a restaurant waiter Correct your spelling
clothes
need
one more cloth ready in case Change the verb form
needs
if
any incident Correct your spelling
of
spoil
the cloth through food or weast. Change the verb form
spoils
However
, there are drawbacks Linking Words
for
Change preposition
to
same
clothing, in my opinion, the blessing Correct article usage
the same
outweigh
the Correct subject-verb agreement
outweighs
unfavorable
sides of it. Change the spelling
unfavourable
To
conclusion, uniform is identical and must Change preposition
In
ware
Wrong verb form
be worn
for
some companies, which have Change preposition
by
much advantage
Fix the agreement mistake
many advantages
than
disadvantages. Even though some of the Rephrase
rather than
humens
may not like to agree with it; it should be a Correct your spelling
humans
must wear
for showing equal respect to each other.Add a hyphen
must-wear
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Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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A strong argument essay structure can be split up into 4 paragraphs, each containing 4 sentences (except the conclusion paragraph, which only contains 3 sentences).
Stick to this essay structure:
- Paragraph 1 - Introduction
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