Solar energy is becoming more and more popular as a source of household energy in many countries around the world. Why is this? What are the advantages and disadvantages of solar energy?
Using the
sun
as a source of energy
for day to day life is common
trend in developed nations of the earth. Due to its availability and Add an article
a common
never ending
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never-ending
power
station, the sun
becoming famous as a
solar Remove the article
apply
energy
. This
essay will demonstrates
the Change the verb form
demonstrate
posetive
feature, Correct your spelling
positive
such
as,
it Remove the comma
apply
prevent
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preventing
environment
pollution and its easy to get from nature. Replace the word
environmental
However
, it having
demerits like Wrong verb form
has
sudden
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a sudden
lose
of Replace the word
loss
storaged
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storage
power
and expensiveness.
The environment
pollution made the scientists think about renewable Replace the word
environmental
energy
and they end up with the solar system for sourcing energy
. It changed the modern world with possibilities of new
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a new
the new
form
of Fix the agreement mistake
forms
energy
for daily life.
The sun
is a blessing because its
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it's
it is
a
ultimate Correct article usage
the
power
with never ending
energetic source of Add a hyphen
never-ending
energy
. People use this
form of energy
with the purpose of creating energies like electricity, cooking, heating and so on. Many developed countries using
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use
this
energy
source as a form of electricity and for geleral
household works. Correct your spelling
general
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, the saint martin ishland
of Bangladesh Correct your spelling
island
depending
fully on the Wrong verb form
depends
sular
system for electrical use. Correct your spelling
solar
Farthermore
, the solar Correct your spelling
Furthermore
power
plant does not produce any pollution in
earth.
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on
On the other hand
, the process of making solar
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a solar
plant
is not Fix the agreement mistake
plants
always
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an always
the always
cheaper
thing to set up easily. Correct article usage
a cheaper
Some time
the solar panel became the reason Replace the word
Sometimes
of
excessive Change preposition
for
hit
on the place where the Fix the agreement mistake
hits
power
station planed. In addition
, if the sun
is not available because of geographical
circle , the Add an article
the geographical
a geographical
energy
will not store to use. For example
, the ngo
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NGO
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show thatCorrect your spelling
survey
,
the village people want to install Remove the comma
apply
solar
system for daily purpose but fail to cope up with Add an article
a solar
for
its installation charge in Bangladesh.
In summary, Change preposition
apply
the
solar Correct article usage
apply
energy
involving
households with its popularity in many states and in Wrong verb form
involves
upcoming
days it will be on top of all Correct article usage
the upcoming
power
stations because of its availability. Although
it having
drawbacks, scientists will find a way to Wrong verb form
has
overcame
it for its necessity of Change the form of the verb
overcome
every day
life.Replace the word
everyday
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