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Solar energy is becoming more and more popular as a source of household energy in many countries around the world. Why is this? What are the advantages and disadvantages of solar energy?

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Using the
sun
 as a source of
energy
 for day to day life is
common
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 trend in developed nations of the earth. Due to its availability and
never ending
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power
 station, the
sun
 becoming famous as
a
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solar
energy
.
This
 essay will
demonstrates
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 the
posetive
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positive
 feature,
such
 as
,
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 it
prevent
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preventing
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environment
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environmental
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 pollution and its easy to get from nature.
However
, it
having
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has
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 demerits like
sudden
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lose
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loss
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 of
storaged
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storage
power
 and expensiveness. The
environment
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environmental
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 pollution made the scientists think about renewable
energy
 and they end up with the solar system for sourcing
energy
. It changed the modern world with possibilities of
new
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a new
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form
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forms
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 of
energy
 for daily life. The
sun
 is a blessing because
its
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it's
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a
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the
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 ultimate
power
 with
never ending
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never-ending
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 energetic source of
energy
. People use
this
 form of
energy
 with the purpose of creating energies like electricity, cooking, heating and so on. Many developed countries
using
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use
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this
energy
 source as a form of electricity and for
geleral
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general
 household works.
For instance
, the saint martin
ishland
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island
 of Bangladesh
depending
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 fully on the
sular
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solar
 system for electrical use.
Farthermore
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Furthermore
, the solar
power
 plant does not produce any pollution
in
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 earth.
On the other hand
, the process of making
solar
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a solar
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plant
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plants
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 is not
always
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an always
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cheaper
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 thing to set up easily.
Some time
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 the solar panel became the reason
of
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for
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 excessive
hit
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hits
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 on the place where the
power
 station planed.
In addition
, if the
sun
 is not available because of
geographical
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the geographical
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 circle , the
energy
 will not store to use.
For example
, the
ngo
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NGO
servay
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survey
 show that
,
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the village people want to install
solar
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a solar
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 system for daily purpose but fail to cope up with
for
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its installation charge in Bangladesh. In summary,
the
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solar
energy
involving
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 households with its popularity in many states and in
upcoming
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 days it will be on top of all
power
 stations because of its availability.
Although
 it
having
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has
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 drawbacks, scientists will find a way to
overcame
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 it for its necessity of
every day
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 life.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Renewable energy
  • Subsidies
  • Tax credits
  • Photovoltaic cells
  • Efficiency
  • Off-grid
  • Carbon footprint
  • Climate change
  • Initial investment
  • Energy security
  • Sustainability
  • Decarbonization
  • Grid parity
  • Feed-in tariff
  • Energy storage systems
  • Payback period
  • Net metering
  • Silicon panels
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