Every year several languages die out. Some people think that this is not important because life will be easier if there are fewer languages in the world. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

It is a common belief that the
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of several
languages
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as
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a minor issue since the
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languages
being used, the more
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convenient
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through
throughout
thought
out the
world
.
However
, there is a more persuasive opinion that local
languages
should be preserved as they represent the diversity of societies. On the one hand, the distinction of some
languages
could be seen as developing milestones. In today's
world
, reducing the usage of dialects and taking
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of
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world wide
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ligustics
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linguistics
logistics
such
as English, Japanese, Chinese and similar things are the short approaches to build international generations. From that, people could connect easily with others from around the
world
without obstacles.
Then
, they would exchange
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knowledge
pieces of knowledge
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, opinions and so on.
For example
, due to the
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of the Internet, English became tremendous and it was an essential requirement in any conversations or relationships. As
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results
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, some type of dialects was obsolete and rapidly be forgotten.
Nevertheless
,
on the other hand
, keeping local
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linguistics
and using them as regular routines are the ways to preserve the traditional and
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culture
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of the societies.
Moreover
, dialect
also
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vivid inhabitants
besides
the modern crowned
urbans
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urban
in which various
languages
spoken
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. That's why in some areas, it would be
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shameful
that people negate their mother tongues. In
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conclusion
, to some extent that several
lingustics
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linguistics
should be protected from extinction and assuring the diversity of
languages
, but
ultilizing
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utilizing
the international ones would be the shortest way to obtain other cultures all over the
world
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Linguistic diversity
  • Cultural heritage
  • Language extinction
  • Communication barrier
  • Linguistic imperialism
  • Endangered languages
  • Language revitalization
  • Monolingual
  • Multilingual
  • Language preservation
  • Homogenization
  • Language policy
  • Cultural assimilation
  • Intangible heritage
  • Indigenous languages
  • Globalization
  • Dialects
  • Localization
  • Language documentation
  • Digital archiving
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