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The increase in mobile phone use in recent years has transformed the way we live, communicate, and do business. Mobile phones can also be the cause of social or medical problems. Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages of mobile phones?

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Most of the
people
 on the earth have
cell
phones
 nowadays, and undoubtedly
this
 invention has ,radically, altered the way we communicate with each other , and has interfered
into
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 how we are running our businesses, and even into our way of thinking and emotions.
Nevertheless
,
although
 mobile
phones
 bring about many advantages
it
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 might impose a tremendous risk mainly on
the
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public health and on social
realatioships
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relationships
. On one hand,
people
 become closer to each other after the era of
cell
phones
 and while it was taking months of
painful
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 waiting to receive a paper letter from our beloved ones, it takes now just a
second
 to communicate with friends and relatives. And some governmental transactions now can be performed completely on the
cell
 phone by using a free mobile application .
Moreover
, most
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smart
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phones
 are provided with cameras that
enabaled
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enabled
enable
a
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photographic documentation of
the
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important daily events and social occasions.
Additionally
, we can read now our
favourit
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favourite
 books on our
cell
phones
instead
 of spending a large amount of money on buying a classic paper book.
On the other hand
, there
are
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 a
punch
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bunch
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 of disadvantages of using mobile
cell
phones
.
First
,
people
ability
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 to perform simple mental calculations have regressed remarkably these days because all calculations can be done by
the
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phone. A recent study ,
for instance
,held in the USA revealed that since the introduction of smart
cell
phones
 , students abilities to perform simple math equations has declined by more than 30%.
Furthermore
, it is not uncommon nowadays to see a group of friends sharing the same table in a coffee shop while each of them is
bussy
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 text
messeging
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messaging
 , surfing the internet , or even playing a game on their
smart
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phones
 that means ,
although
smart
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phones
 bring
people
 together or they supposed to do so, they might play the opposite role and keep
people
 away from each other.
Finally
, a considerable number of
people
 became really
obssesd
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obsessed
in
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 videoing their life events even the private and confidential ones and whatever might
considered
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 silly or shallow. in order to
brodcast
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broadcast
 it and gain some money out of it. All of those drawbacks , in my opinion, do not outweigh the uncountable edges of
such
 a brilliant device. In conclusion , mobile
cell
phones
 have ,positively, changed our lives
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forever
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for ever
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, and despite the
cons
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it
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they
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 represent a
genuos
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genus
genius
 invention that profoundly boosted the prosperity of humanity.
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