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The picture below shows Bell Hill farm in 1976 and the changes that took place in 2006. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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The map depicts the considerable transformation of Bell Hill farm to Environment centre over a period of time from 1976 to 2006. Overall, during
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, many new infrastructures were newly established to it. One of the major observations is the storage(for farm machinery) has been completely demolished and turned into a parking area for the centre. It is observed that multimedia room and recreation area has been built beside the road where there is barnyard used to be. There were no changes made for the farmhouse, it is still in the same place as, like how it was constructed in 1976. Previously, there are cow sheds and chickens to the right of the farmhouse, over the
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 30 years, it was converted into student housing.
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