The two maps below show an island, befor and after the construction of some tourist facilities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisions where relevant.

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The two given maps illustrate an

island

which is constructed and built some more new tourist sites.

Overall

, the

island

is completely changed with new facilities

although

the tree areas remain. It can be observed that lots of accommodations are built up for shelters which are arranged in a circular. In front of each lodge, there is a footpath that

interchange

Correct subject-verb agreement

interchanges

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lodges together.

Moreover

, a reception is placed in the middle of the

island

so visitors can easily

check-in

Correct your spelling

check in

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or out, and there is a restaurant behind it. There is a pier which is in front of the

island

and some boats are put

to it. The beach expands a swimming area for tourists and they can go there on a footpath.

Vehicle

Correct article usage

A vehicle

show examples

track is built from the pier to the reception and the restaurant.

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Clear and correct grammar

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