As languages such as English, Spanish and Mandarin become more widely spoken, there is a fear that many minority languages may die out. Some countries have taken steps to protect minority languages.

There is no doubt that these days keeping on
minority
languages
such
as Arabic from fading away has a great cause to concern all over the world. The question is, is it right to take measures to maintain these minorities from dying? In
this
essay, I am going to draw my own conclusion regard to
this
protection. In terms of the positive side,
countries
have taken several procedures to keep
minority
languages
from becoming old. The main reason given to support
this
claim is that allowing for a person to speak
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his unique
language
will keep into diversity between people. To illustrate, both fascination and curiosity that
language
can bring them will attract directly many
language
learners to study it.
In other words
, when
language lovers
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travel to discover a particular
language
and learn it,
this
language
-speaking country will be famous and welcome more
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learners, which in turn lead to improve the economy in general.
Thus
,
this
economic growth is
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vital not just to citizens but
also
to the
language
itself.
However
, it is not necessary
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certain procedures to protect
minority
languages
.
First
of all, because
language
is the main type to communicate among people.
In other words
, talking with a major
language
such
as English is essential to prevent misunderstandings that occur through sticking to our
second
languages
.
Secondly
,
minority
language
can affect negatively
to
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the country's development.
This
is because evolution requires dealing with large
countries
such
as the United States and China.
Consequently
,
this
approach will lead to
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the flourishing
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of the country.
Furthermore
, should not encourage and protect
minority
languages
. In conclusion,
although
low
languages
have distinctive aspects and it is likely to extinct; due they are not widely spoken, I believe that
countries
should focus their efforts in response to globalization and how to empower children to speak by global
languages
for easily connecting with the whole
countries
.
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