It’s time to ban social media. It has been shown that it has made life worse for people all over the world, from politics, to self-image, to the spread of disinformation. It is a social experiment that has not worked and it is time to say goodbye.To what extent do you agree with the above statement?
#it’s #time #ban #media #life #people #world #politics #self-image #spread #disinformation #experiment #goodbye
Social has long been an important part of many people's
life
,it help us to solve many problems,help our life become more Replace the word
lives
convinience
in many Correct your spelling
convenience
convenient
aspact
.Correct your spelling
aspects
aspect
However
,there are opinions that social media
should be banned Correct your spelling
due
duo
to Correct your spelling
due
it
drawbacks in many Change the pronoun
its
face
like politics,self-image,the spread of disinformation,...As for me,I don't completely agree with Change to a plural noun
faces
this
opinion
On the one hand,there are a number of benefits from using social networks for communication. Firstly
, it
we have to say social Correct pronoun usage
apply
media
has brought us closer than ever,it bond people together,help us to find Correct your spelling
an
and
old friend,help us to find someone who Correct your spelling
an
have
the same hobbies Change the verb form
has
with
us,or even help you find your other half. Change preposition
as
Facebook
is now having 2.4 billion users who can connect and interact with anyone they want, regardless of where they are. Secondly
,Social media
is a helpful tool in marketing and business. In this
modern technology age, companies can update their sale programs or promotions by posting their campaigns on Facebook
or Instagram, which helps them save an enormous deal of time and financial
compared to the traditional methods of advertising in newspapers or magazines.
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finances
On the other hand
,Social media
also
bring negative impacts.Most social media
like Facebook
,twitter
,...are free to Change the capitalization
Twitter
use
for anyone,which mean you only need an internet device to connect to these social media
,so they have to use
advertising for their income.Social media
user are
not customers,they are more like the stocks that are on Change the verb form
is
Correct your spelling
themselves
the
Correct your spelling
them
selves
,to be exact,Correct your spelling
shelves
for example
,facebook
secretly gather users information to find out what we really care for,they gather Change the capitalization
Facebook
informations
Change the wording
information
pieces of information
such
as our search history,our chat,conversations and use
those information
to let us see what we need,and the problem is what if they Change the determiner
that information
use
those information
for bad purposes?One more Change the determiner
that information
drawbacks
of social Change to a singular noun
drawback
media
is
that it takes too much of our time.When you Change the verb form
are
used
to Add a missing verb
are used
using
social Change the verb form
use
media
,it'll becomes
a part of your life,you feel empty if you don't hold a phone and move your fingers,that's what we call addiction.Many youngsters today Change the verb form
become
addicted
to social Add a missing verb
are addicted
media
,they started to separte
themselves from social,stick their eyes on the phone,and care nothing Correct your spelling
separate
around
them.Correct your spelling
about
This
problem is seriously became
a fatal problem in Wrong verb form
become
social
today.
In conclusion,using social Replace the word
society
media
have both advantages and disadvantages,we can't deny the benefits that social media
bring to us,use
it carefully,harm or unharm
,it depends on you
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