You are a student at a language school in New Zealand studying Business English. Part of the course is a summer work placement programme. Unfortunately, you have just learnt from the school that this programme has now been cancelled. Write a letter to the School Principal. In your letter: state your reason for writing describe the problem and your concerns explain what you would like the Principal to do.

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Dear

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Adam, I am writing

this

letter to ask about the possibility of taking a break

week

from work. As my qualification exam for the Certificate of SolidWorks Associate (CSWA) is

Sunday. I know one

week

break is considered an immense amount of time, but it is the minimum I can take to be able to get a high score in the exam. I am supposed to work on the Matlab task

week

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I will do my best to finish it the

week

after, together with the newly assigned tasks for sure. I am planning to stay after hours for the whole

week

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compensation for the

week

that I will not be working on.

Finally

, I would like to say that the CSWA is extremely important for my career as an Engineer, and I assure

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you that I will use it for the prosperity of the company in the future. Yours sincerely, Ahmed Moter

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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

firstly
secondly
thirdly
in additional
moreover
also
for example
for instance
therefore
however
although
even though
despite

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

162 words

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