Using a computer every day can have more negative than positive effects on your children. Do you agree or disagree?

In the era of digital technology, whether

parents

let their offspring use a computer on a daily basis does more harm than good has been a controversial topic. The majority believes that

such

electronic devices should be under the observation of

parents

due to lots of hazardous issues which the kids can be faced with. I totally agree with

this

viewpoint, and

this

essay will analyze some justifications.

Firstly

, if

children

are too immersed in the computer world and do not have a particular strategy to control the

time

, they are prone to neglect the study at school. Video games, films, books, social networks … are definitely

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attractive stuff because of their diversity and high recreation.

Children

will quickly stick to the screen all day with a reasonable reason that they need

time

to “beat stress” and if their

parents

don’t take

time

to pay more attention and remind them to concentrate on their study, as a consequence, the kids who are

pleasure seeking

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, easily forget about the exercises at school they have to finish or review the lesson before class. The less

time

they use to study, the worse grades they get. Their final result must be badly affected if they don’t change immediately.

Secondly

, the “uncensored online space” that computers provide

children

can damage the

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of any child from a young age. The

first

key rationale is that the youngsters don't have the perception to distinguish how much the percentage of positive content is. Many programs which are violent, immoral, vulgar and encourage people to break the law, in

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cannot limit the viewers' age and bring about

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impact on

children

if they access them. The

second

one, they may make friends with other bad

children

,

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and imitate the inappropriate

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.

This

is considered to be

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prejudice for our society because they can commit an offence and become

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lawbreakers. In conclusion, it is of paramount importance that

parents

are

well advised

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to take care of their

children

and limit the spending of computer

time

to prevent them from dealing with

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dangerous issues.