Some countries achieve international success by building specialized facilities to train top athletes instead of providing sports facilities that everyone can use. Do you think it is a positive or negative development？
This
is depends
on the government political view Change the verb form
depends
for
Change preposition
of
this
situation. Let's see each position, and find which method is better for country sport
, especially for spotrmens
who give all their life for Correct your spelling
sportsmen
traning
and might be for Olimpic Game.
On the one hand, providing better facilities for top athletes is a good choice, because they already show some result, and subsidizing them give more chance to get Correct your spelling
training
good
result in each discipline. Traning and Add an article
a good
attend
to some Wrong verb form
attending
sport
events it's very important for top sportsmen, and they try all their best to achieve Change the noun form
sports
good
Add an article
a good
result
. Fix the agreement mistake
results
Furthermore
, focus
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focusing
in
top sportsmen save budget because no need Change preposition
on
train
them from the beginning. Fix the infinitive
to train
This
method is suitable for countries such
as the USA, UK or other same nations,
because finance takes Remove the comma
apply
main
place in Change the article
the main
this
question.
On the other hand
, How to select top sportsmen from the population. They can't be stright be
a good sportsman. How to find Fix the infinitive
to be
best
one from the nation. In Correct article usage
the best
this
case
need to build facilities for all citizens. Add a comma
,case
This
is give
an opportunity for all and especially for young people, to try their skills in Change the verb form
gives
sport
, and might be one of them can be a future Olipmic winner. Furthermore
, sport
buildings, special areas make the nation Change the noun form
sports
more
healthier. In Change the word
apply
fact
Add a comma
,fact
this
play
a good role in population health.
In conclusion, we can say that Change the verb form
plays
pay
more attention to Wrong verb form
paying
sport
in common it
has good results. And have an indirect effect Correct pronoun usage
apply
for
Change preposition
on
country
, government and nation.Add an article
the country
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