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In many countries, an increase in crime has been blamed on violent images on TV and computer and video games. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion

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The exposure to
voilence
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violence
 on
TV
 and computer has increased rapidly in
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recent days thereby increasing the crime rate.
Although
, in my opinion, the
content
 in
TV
/computers
are
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a
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 main cause, we cannot blame them entirely as there are other underlying factors which affects a person's personality.
TV
 and computers have become an inevitable part of our lives and we have access to all sorts of
content
thats
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that's
that
 possibly available. Most of the
content
 these days subtly or evidently use violence as their weapon to get what they need and
this
 leaves a bad impression among the viewers. They
also
 teach that fighting for what you love is never wrong. So people get influenced and use violence to get things done. But we cannot blame the
tv
/computers entirely for their
behavior
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. Their
behavior
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 is highly influenced by their friends and the family
cirumstances
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circumstances
 they are exposed to. If they see a father and a mother fighting at home or if friends fighting among themselves there is a high chance that they will pick up their
behaviors
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. So parents have to
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 cautious about how they behave in front of the kids and
also
 their
responsiblity
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responsibility
 to check the kind of friends circle their child is a part of as they tend to leave lasting impressions. So, in my opinion,
although
 I agree that the
content
 in media is a cause for the
raise
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 in crime and violence there are
also
 other factors that affect one's
behavior
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. So we cannot entirely blame
TV
/computer without identifying the underlying factor.
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