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Some people think that the best way to improve road safety is to increase the minimum legal age for driving a car or motorbike. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Many people assert that to better
road
safety
 , the minimum legal age for getting a driving license for two and four-wheelers drivers is to rise. I believe that raising
this
 minimum legal age would not have a significant effect on
road
safety
. Rather banning the use of mobile
phones
 and other
road
safety
 measures can improve the
road
safety
 level.
Firstly
, mobile
phones
 are the major cause of
accidents
. By banning those during driving can solve a big problem for
road
safety
. People get diverted during operating their mobile
phones
. They chat on messengers, talking to other persons have put their presence of mind to other places which could lead to
road
accidents
. According to
a
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research in the Oxford University of America, an application on
phones
 named Snapchat ,
people
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 use mostly during car driving, for video making is the major cause of
accidents
.
Moreover
, obeying traffic
safety
 measures help in increasing
road
safety
. One of them is giving
indicator
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 while turning left or right helps following car driver. Not obeying traffic lights is one of the major causes of
accidents
. Folks do it only to save a few minutes but result in bad
accidents
. So following them properly helps in raising
road
safety
 levels. Heavy challans and punishment should be given to those who are not following the rules so that they are under the pressure to obey them. Dubai is one of the best
example
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 of
this
 where heavy fines are imposed on drivers who
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 neglecting them and following
this
 practice helps in better
road
safety
 among many countries. In conclusion, I think there are many better alternatives that can help in raising
road
safety
 than increasing the minimum age limit for drivers.
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