The tendency of human beings to copy one another is shown in the popularity of areas such as fashion and consumer goods. To what extent do you agree?

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It is considered by many that vogue
industry
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and sales of different
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to
people
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to try to be same each other and I agree.
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of buying different
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people
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prefer
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buy the most
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products
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to stay fashionable.
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, many
people
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are influenced by
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the vogue
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industry
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because
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this
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bussines
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business
try to sell the same product with an
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important
or famous person. In fact,
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youths
wants
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to
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either the clothes or some cars to
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demonstrate
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status,
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can be
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affect
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to
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people
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to obtain the same
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another persons
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in Chile, if a futbolist in
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adverstiment
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advertisement
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special sneakers, many mas
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to be like him buying the
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same
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, the capacity to copy each other is a natural behaviour of human
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, because we need to survive
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social pressure and
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is an important factor in their acts.
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,
fashion
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the fashion
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industry
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sell
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to
people
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copy the different models either their clothes or anything that
their
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dressed like
jewleries
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jewelries
jewelleries
.
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,
this
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people
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want to imitated the models because
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bussines
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business
is one the biggest in the world. In conclusion, the capacity of
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being
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beings
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to copy each other is a natural behaviour and I agree. I could say that in the vogue
industry
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we can see
that is
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good
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goo
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example because their
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sales
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are
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extremely
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hight
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high
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • conform
  • social norms
  • evolutionary psychology
  • survival
  • advertising
  • influencer marketing
  • celebrity endorsements
  • trends
  • followers
  • psychological comfort
  • social ostracism
  • mass production
  • high-end fashion
  • uniformity
  • cultural homogenization
  • globalization
  • media
  • spread
  • affordable
  • imitate
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