1.Universities and colleges are now offering qualifications through distance leaning from the internet than teachers in the classroom. Do you think the advantages of development outgoing the disadvantages?

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Nowadays,many
universities
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and colleges have not allowed
students
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to learn in school due to the COVID-19 pandemic.
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, the qualifications are now given to
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through
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leaning
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instead
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of teaching in the classroom. I think the advantages of
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development outweigh the
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. Some
people
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believe that
students
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cannot master the skills and knowledge due to a lack of
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to monitor them while learning. They claim
distance
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education
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cannot create a positive surrounding, which will cause their grades to be very poor.
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,
students
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who live at home might not communicate with classmates and friends
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to
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as often, resulting in relationships becoming weaker and not staying in touch. Despite the
disadvantages
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mentioned above, I think there are two main
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why some
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think the merits outweigh the
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.
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,
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in
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should not be worried about where they learn and their living fees.
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, if international
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could get their diplomas via the internet,
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means that they could live in their comfortable house and save costs on accommodation.
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, with online
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it is easy to communicate directly to tutors and teachers about academic questions, doubts, and assignments are easy to find. These advantages could enhance the effects
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studying and teaching. I think remote
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could
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give an equal opportunity to some
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that come from poverty to educate them. In conclusion, for the above
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, I think we gain more from learning on the Internet than we may lose. Nowadays,many
universities
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and colleges did not allow that
students
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learn in school due to the COVID-19.
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, the qualifications are given to
students
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through
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distance
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learning
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leaning
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instead
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of teaching in the classroom. I think the advantages of
development
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outweigh the
disadvantages
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. Some
people
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believe that
students
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could not master the skills and knowledge due to no teacher to monitor them to learn and
distance
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education
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cannot create
a positive surroundings
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, which will cause that their grades were very poor.
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,
students
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who lived in their own home might
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communicate with classmates and friends
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face
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resulting
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relationships would become weak and not in close touch. Despite the
disadvantages
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mentioned above, I think there are two main
reasons
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why some
people
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would think the merits outweigh defects.
Firstly
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,
students
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in
universities
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did not be worried about where they learn and their living fees .
For example
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, the international
students
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, if they could get the diplomas via the
education
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online and
this
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mean
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that they could live in their comfortable house and save the
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of costs from
accommodation
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the accommodation
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.
secondly
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,
online
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education
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, it is easy to commute directly to tutors and teachers to talk about the academic questions and doubts,
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the assignment
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easy to allocate and select. These could enhance effects from the studying and teaching. I think remote
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could give
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equal right to some
students
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that came from
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poverty areas to make them
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acquire knowledge. In conclusion, for all
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above, I think we gain more from learning on the Internet than we lose.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • unparalleled flexibility
  • democratizes education
  • geographically isolated
  • personal circumstances
  • cost-effectiveness
  • accommodation
  • commuting
  • self-motivated learning
  • self-discipline
  • time management
  • direct interaction
  • feelings of isolation
  • quality and recognition
  • inferior
  • technical issues
  • digital divide
  • reliable technology
  • underprivileged
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