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Students should focus on learning in the classroom rather than show their status by wearing fashionable clothes. Therefore all students should wear school uniform. Do you agree or disagree

#students #focus #classroom #show #status #clothes #school #uniform
Pupils
 should concentrate on
the
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 studies when in the classroom
instead
 of wearing fashionable clothes and showing off their financial status.
hence
 to create
the
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uniformity among
students
uniform
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uniforms
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 must be
weared
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worn
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 by all. I complete concur with the statement said before.
This
 essay will state that how
an
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uniform
symbolize
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 equality among
pupils
 in the
first
 half and the
second
 half of the essay will say that when
dress
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a dress
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 code is defined no one feels inferior
from
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 others.
To begin
 with, school is the place where
variety
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a variety
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 of
students
 come to gain knowledge in order to become a good
citizen
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citizens
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 of a nation, and it is
mendatory
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mandatory
 for them to build social ethics from a young age by removing discrimination of clothing styles among
pupils
.
Moreover
, when
students
 wear
same
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 colour and style dress
then
 they are not able to judge
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anyone
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any one
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anyone
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 on the behalf of styles because while putting same dresses it gives the
feelings
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 that they are at the same financial status.
Besides
this
,
students
 are
also
 able to focus more on the courses
instead
 of getting distracted from dresses
,
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 and putting all
energy
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their energy
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in
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 deciding what to wear in order to look best. To illustrate, in some colleges and schools
pupils
 wear
same
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the same
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 style of
uniform
 assigned by
institution
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the institution
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 that leads the feeling of equality among them
,
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 and do not carry any hatred feeling for others.
In addition
 to
this
,
institution
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the institution
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 is the place where every variety of pupil comes and concentrate on the courses in which they are involved;
however
, when these
students
 are having
same
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 dress code
then
 it does not make any complex feeling among
students
.
Furthermore
, all
students
 are confident enough to interact with each other as no
impedus
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impetus
 are present which stop them. Apart from
this
, the under privilege
students
also
 feel happy and confident to give their opinion among the crowd as they consider themselves one of them.
For example
, in some schools elite societies children
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under-privilege
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under-privileged
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 attend
same
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 school, and able to make good bond without having discrimination in mind of a rich and a poor. In conclusion, I agreed with the statement that
uniform
 should be there for
students
 as it creates uniformity among them as well as remove any inferior feeling if any generated in
pupil
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the pupil
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.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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