14. Due to the development and rapid expansion of supermarkets, many small local businesses are unable to compete. Some people think that the closure of local business will bring about the death of local communities. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Nowadays,
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are being expanded and developed rapidly into the remote areas as well, thereby affecting the local
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too. Some
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think that due to the domination of
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, local
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might get
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and ultimately causing the eradication of local communities. While
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others think the quite opposite. I strongly agree with the given statement and in
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essay, I will discuss both the views and the arguments supporting them. On the one hand, due to the extensive development and expansion of
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, many
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are inclined towards them as they tend to offer
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of commodities in them.
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of all, due to the numerous options and as well as exciting offers provided by the
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, consumers are attracted towards
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and prefer them over the typical local stores.
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, local
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get affected and thereby, they are forced to shut their
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down.
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results in the unemployment of the
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associated with the local
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as well.
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, forcing the local and remote area
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to migrate to other places for better employment, ultimately
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the death of local communities.
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, the
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of local stores might increase due to the proliferating competition with the
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. Though
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many
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are attracted to the offers and discounts offered by the
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, some
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go for buying goods at the local
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only in some remote and rural areas.
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, some
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have issues like lack of trust
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of goods sold by
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and they prefer goods of local traders only.
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,
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might not be the case these days due to increasing urbanisation. To conclude, I strongly believe that
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do affect the local
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and
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them to shut in
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of the cases,
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resulting in the extermination of local communities.
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