Students should focus on learning in the classroom rather than show their status by wearing fashionable clothes. Therefore all students should wear school uniform. Do you agree or disagree

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studying
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with that
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because I believe that the methods of teaching
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most
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be a restricted policy for
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many
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attach
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special care
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especially
for private schools to improve the quality of the learning approach.
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the same
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they work hard to attract the parents to
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their child in their place. We can clearly notice that the different ways of learning help kids to
performe
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highly , so
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in modern nations many
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that
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the life of the farmer easy much than before because they replace the handworking with an engine to
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control
the work.
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many schools gives a wide
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freedom
from
to the
pupils
and many problems were occurs
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go right and car more on having a good score in their subjects.
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new and fashin clothes , they just wear a known dress for everyone. A good example of
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students
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to promote the teaching methods to
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the
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going forward the policy and
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perform
a well level without any small troubles. In conclusion, the types of uniform that student wears
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not have
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importance around us , while the methods of teaching
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in
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is
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much more considerable . I think that
students
most look the same in terms of wearing and
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why the ways of learning become important than the silly topics and many issues
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during
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