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Men and women can never share the same responsibilities at home and in everyday life. Do you agree or disagree?

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Gender discrimination is a crucial issue in today’s fast-paced world. It is asserted by some people that females and males have different capabilities for accomplishing their duties and responsibilities either home or life. I tend to disagree with the statement to a large degree owing to some rational reasons The
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 underlying justification is everybody has particular abilities irrespective of gender. In the past, it was commonly believed that
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 should be just doing household chores and men as the breadwinner of their family were working outdoor since most families lived in rural areas and it was just important for them to obviate their basic needs including food, clothes and accommodation. While during the time people moved to urban areas for greener pastures and
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 of their requirements had increased. They are faced whit new needs
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 as tuition fees, transportation costs.
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, both
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 and men had to work together until be able to accommodate their necessities. Another compelling reason is
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 were spending most of their time on four corners of the house previously, they did not aware of their potentials and abilities as well. But, in today’s world,
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 prefer to play a beneficial role not only at home but
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 in society. An obvious example of
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 is Angela Merkel, the prime minister of Germany who seems present at men-based career, but she has proved that very successful in
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 field. The same is true for men. Some males have become professional in household activities
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 as cooking. Take Burak, a Turkish chef who is very famous for his foods and recipes throughout the world as an example. To conclude,
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, it seems that each gender has its own particular features, I personally believe that both genders have equal abilities to take shoulder responsibilities in their personal life as well as social life.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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