Today, the quality of life in large cities is decreasing. Discuss the cause and solutions.

Nowadays, the

quality

of living of

people

in big

cities

is getting worst. In

this

essay, I am going to talk about the causes of

this

and give some

potetial

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potential

solutoins

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solutions

to improve it.

Firstly

, in the

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biggest

bigest

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cities

of

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in

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our world, one of the

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biggest

bigest

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biggest

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problems is fast food, which rise

the

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health problems.

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instance

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New York is the city that

produce

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the most street food in the world at a very cheap price. Secondarily, the rent is getting

realy

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really

ready

expencive

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expensive

even for an

ordinarily

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person. So

people

need to work harder to pay the bills,

furthermore

increase the stress

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and

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an

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and

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anxiety in them.

Although

for every

problems

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there is a solution that can be done.

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the other hand,

government

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the government

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can take place to contribute to a better

quality

of life. They should

promte

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promote

healthier options

instead

of letting just fast food

to

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apply

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denvelop

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develop

in those

cities

.

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example

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decreasing the price of healthy products and

advertise

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advertising

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more of them. Another thing that could help

rise

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raise

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the

quality

of living is

reduce

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to reduce

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bills and

rental

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rentals

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, so

people

don't have to stress as much as before, working extra hours to pay

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everything

everithing

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. In conclusion, the

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lifestyle

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life style

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lifestyle

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of

people

is going to get worst in

this

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these

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big

cities

, unless something

it

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is done to improve it, and

people

has

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to

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rely

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relay

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rely

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on

government

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the government

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to do it.

Although

in my opinion if they won't change anything, our life

quality

will not get better any time soon.