The Internet has made a positive impact on our life. Do you agree or disagree?

In today's modern era, nobody can imagine life without
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totally changed our lifestyle. All
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are dependent
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computers
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these days.
This
makes our life easier. I am partially agreed
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the given notion. In my perspective, it has more advantages
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disadvantages. In the following, paragraphs we will discuss in
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. At the
first
glance, through
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social
websites
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everyone feels connected. To explain it, the majority of people have
their
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social account where they can upload their daily routine tasks
such
as
,
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images or videos.
For example
, if someone is living abroad, he or she can talk to their parents through video
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on
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WhatsApp
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or through other applications.
Thus
, they feel they are talking
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face to face with them.
In addition
to it,
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the internet
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is a great source of
information
. To illustrate it, students can find study materials by surfing the
internet
at
anytime
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or from any corner of the world.
Furthermore
, it provides not only
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information
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it
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very useful for entertainment like, playing video games or watching movies or doing shopping.
Although
having beneficial factors, it
also
has some demerits.
Firstly
, adults and children are using it all
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day as they
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to it. Which is not good for their health.
Moreover
, no doubt they learn many things from the
internet
but from the long
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they develop
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issues i.e. obesity, weak
eye sight
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and slow brain and so on. Another most important negative point is false
information
.
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, users put wrong
information
on
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that may cause
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fraud or misleading.
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conclusion,
Internet
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the Internet
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is a wider platform where you can find any
information
, play games, video calls,
online
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shopping or
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at very low rates. But be careful
or
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false
information
and parents should limit the time for their children and keep an eye on their search history to avoid any loss.
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