Some people think air travel has more negative impact than positive on modern life,to what extent do you agree or disagree?

People have different views about whether
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is a positive trend in modern life. Personally, I support the idea that
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makes it easier to
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all around the world despite the fact that it poses threat to human’s life and the environment.
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and foremost,it is evidently reasonable for me to believe that
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can broaden people’s leisure experience by providing a wide choice of holiday destinations around the world.Compared to railway and cruise,
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travel
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is the fastest way to get from one place to another.To be more specific,the efficiency of
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makes it possible for people to overcome the geographical barriers enjoying the scenery of foreign countries.
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,
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,which makes travelling more convenient,can generate local economic growth.
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can be established by a recent study of the University of London which stated that a 53% increase
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profit was witnessed in a town
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Thailand after
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was built
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2005. There are several reasons why I believe that
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is uncertain and unreliable.
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,weather conditions,
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as snow,fog,storm,may cause the cancellation of frights.
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, the weather is kind of unpredictable.
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,a small mistake can be very dangerous while aircraft are working.
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crashes may be caused by extreme speed and height even in confined space.At the same time,there is no doubt that it increases environmental pressure,which speeds up the process of global warming. In a nutshell,due to the mentioned reasons,we may reach the conclusion that the advantages of
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overweight
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