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Some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

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Many folks consider
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 as catalysts between generations and ethnicities. I fully agree with the statement as
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 has the ability to connect with the soles of every individual. The musicians have been mesmerising their audience for ages in every society.
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, people have different languages to sing
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 tones are connecting bridge between all human beings.
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, India and Pakistan have different languages and cultures, but both nations enjoy border away
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.
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, singers display the social structure and practices of societies by the use of
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. In
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 way, people from distinct ethnicity can understand the values of different societies by their
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 and lyrics. In the same way as Americans widespread their culture in the world by their
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 in Hollywood.
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,
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 passes the older culture of any society to the new generation with fun. In the era of globalisation, everything is becoming similar, but
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 is still playing a vital role to introduce the primary practices of their elders. In
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 way,
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 gives the reminder of the efforts and sacrifices of their fore father's which connects valuable attachment between older and younger generations. As an example, patriotic
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 praises their elders' sacrifices and attach the youngsters to the core values of their nation, religion and culture. Apart from
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,
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 enhances the relationship between parents and children. As it connects teenagers to their language and rituals which align their moral spirituality which
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 them to understand and follow the guidance of their guardians. In conclusion, the bridging between cultures and nations is possible by the use of
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 as
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 has no language.
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also
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 helps to boost the relationship between generations by introducing their cultural facts with fun.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • universal language
  • evoke
  • connect
  • diverse audiences
  • cultural exchange
  • generational gaps
  • shared experiences
  • unifying force
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