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Some people say that E-books and modern technology will totally replace traditional newspaper and magazines to what extent do you agree or disagree.

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There is no doubt that these days the significance of
technology
 becoming very popular.
However
, the question: Are digital
book
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books
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 and the development of technologies will change the old ways
such
 as newspapers and
magazine
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magazines
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? Is considered one of the most controversial issues today. In
this
 essay, I am going to examine
this
 phenomenon from both viewpoints. On one side of the argument, there are people who argue that online materials and e-
technology
 will be used more than
oldest
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 tools. The main reason for believing
this
 is using
e book
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e-book
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 will make it easier for us to read, send, and download
it
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them
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.
Moreover
, it is possible to say that
these newest trend
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this newest trend
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 for reading with using these technologies enable us to read and search for our information
in
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at
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 any time and place. One good illustration of
this
 is artificial intelligence, which
make
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 our lifestyle very flexible by depending on robots and
technology
.
On the other hand
, it is
also
 possible to consider the opposing case. It is often argued that in fact newspapers and magazines will be used and the improvement of it will not affect them. People often have
this
 opinion because
although
 the development of modern tools and
technology
, there are some individuals
still
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 can not deal with them.
Therefore
, they prefer to read from
printed-paper
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printed paper
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 and physical staff.
In addition
, depending on new
technology
 tools is not
scuire
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secure
 and safety because there
is
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are
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 increase problems from theses
technology
such
 as
hakkaer
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hacker
. As we have seen, there are no easy answers to
this
 question. On balance,
however
, I tend to believe that using technologies will replace all previous way of not only reading but
also
 our lif
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