you are a student at an english language school in brighton and are living in private accomodation with other flat mates. You have not had hot water or heating for some time. the landlord's workmen have tried to fix the problem but without success. write a letter to the landlord. in your letter: . state your reason for writing . describe the problems . propose a solution

Dear Mr Henry, I am writing
this
letter to draw your attention to that
issue
of hot
water
has not been working since the
last
week due to
over heating
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while we use. I am living in your Sunshine apartment, flat no is 14. I and my roommate
also
suffers
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without
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from
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hot
water
amenities because
this
country climate is very cold. You have fixed
this
problem
in
one
month before
bt
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but
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that repair process does not work. We have been facing
this
issue
since you fixed the repair,
problem
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the problem
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is
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overheating
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over heating
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overheating
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and sometimes does not come hot
water
.
Moreover
, I cannot
ready
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for my college
in
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on time due to
this
problem
. You have already repaired
this
water
heater so I have
one
solution
about
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this
terrible
issue
. You have to install a new quality
water
heater for us
instead
of repairing old ones. Because again and
again
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this
trouble will happen,
thus
, you will install
new
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one
.
Moreover
,
one
of my friends are working in a plumping company and he is
a
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plumper so he would be fixed
this
problem
immediately and his company sales quality
water
heater too. I would be grateful if you would solve
this
issue
for us. I look forward to receiving your response as soon as possible. Thanking you, Your's sincerely, Rehana.
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