you are a student at an english language school in brighton and are living in private accomodation with other flat mates. You have not had hot water or heating for some time. the landlord's workmen have tried to fix the problem but without success. write a letter to the landlord. in your letter: . state your reason for writing . describe the problems . propose a solution
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Dear Mr Henry,
I am writing
this
letter to draw your attention to that issue
of hot water
has not been working since the last
week due to over heating
while we use. I am living in your Sunshine apartment, flat no is 14. I and my roommate Correct your spelling
overheating
also
suffers
Change the verb form
suffer
without
hot Change preposition
from
water
amenities because this
country climate is very cold.
You have fixed this
problem
in one
month before bt
that repair process does not work. We have been facing Correct your spelling
but
this
issue
since you fixed the repair, problem
is Add an article
the problem
Correct your spelling
overheating
over heating
and sometimes does not come hot Correct your spelling
overheating
water
. Moreover
, I cannot ready
for my college Add a missing verb
be ready
in
on time due to Change preposition
apply
this
problem
.
You have already repaired this
water
heater so I have one
solution about
Change preposition
to
this
terrible issue
. You have to install a new quality water
heater for us instead
of repairing old ones. Because again and again
Add a comma
,again
this
trouble will happen, thus
, you will install new
Add an article
a new
the new
one
. Moreover
, one
of my friends are working in a plumping company and he is a
plumper so he would be fixed Remove the article
apply
this
problem
immediately and his company sales quality water
heater too. I would be grateful if you would solve this
issue
for us.
I look forward to receiving your response as soon as possible.
Thanking you,
Your's sincerely,
Rehana.Submitted by reanudeepan on
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