Some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
It is true that
music
is known as a universal appeal which uniting variant cultures and ages by some other people
. I partially agree on
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with
of
that Change preposition
apply
music
connects people
despite of
cultural and age barriers.
On the one hand , Remove the preposition
apply
music
has the power to emphasize the uniqueness and beauty of cultures around the world into
the light. There are numerous cultures with various languages and customs which exposes the profound meanings of each of their societies. Change preposition
in
For instance
, Hindi songs are well recognized
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well-recognized
music
in the world and have reached out many
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to many
people
’s hearts by now. In those songs , it is admittedly visible the cultural differences from their melodies and visuals, which shows off fascinatingly about their culture. Hence
, music
has been played an enormous role connecting
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in connecting
people
together by embracing multiculturism.
On the other hand
, contradictorily, connecting people
through music
hold on hoisting
the best out of it because of song genres. Throughout the decades, Change preposition
to hoisting
music
industry has made a stride in various genres, which became popular but only among certain targeted crowds. Add an article
the music
For instance
, in 80’s
pop Fix apostrophe usage
’80s
music
has become worldwide
phenomenon with English pop singers Add an article
a worldwide
such
as Michael Jackson. However
, youth nowadays are more likely into hip pop
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hip-pop
music
with the rise of singers like Eminem. Therefore
, connecting youth and old through music
is not always a smooth approach. Another instance, with the evolved progress in k-pop in Change the capitalization
Korea
korea
has Add the comma(s)
,korea
their
own enormous fan base within the country itself, which makes a slim chance of exposing other cultural Correct pronoun usage
its
music
there.
In conclusion, although
uniting people
together through music
has chances in various
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a various
way
despite Fix the agreement mistake
ways
of
cultural and age mismatches , in my option, there are undeniable difficulties too to connect Remove the preposition
apply
people
together via music
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