The exploration and development of safe alternatives to fossil fuels should be the most important global priority today To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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he h

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uman being’s history, fossil

fuels

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as

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always been the most popular source of

energy

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.

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, in recent years, with the issues c

ausing

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by

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type of

energy

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and the growing need for

fuels

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, I believe that finding a replacement for fossil fuel is needed is should b

e prioritize.

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, fossil

fuels

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i

s

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extremely harmful when used. They emit out a large a

mount

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of toxic chemicals

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as carbon dioxide or coal dust, which can cause severe damage to the environment as well as f

or

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human well-being. Carbon dioxide is the main factor contributing to the f

orm

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of acid rain, air pollution and the rising global temperature; while coal dust can be highly dangerous for h

uman’s

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respiratory system, with t

heir

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ability o

f

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revent

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oxygen to be absorbed by blood cells. In many s

ub-urban

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areas of China, the o

verpoluted

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over polluted

overpopulated

air caused by many factories using fossil

fuels

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has forced millions of c

itizen

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to leave their homes, and make their life b

ecame

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unstable. Another disadvantage of fossil

fuels

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is their unsustainable. Plenty of scientists has said that

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type of

energy

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can only

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for a few more decades before completely r

un

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out. If a substitute doesn’t come t

o a

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vailable soon, an

energy

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crisis will occur. Many factories will have to be closed, the unemployment ratio will rise, and thousands of people’s l

ive

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will b

e affect.

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apidly

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development of technology lately has boosted the use of fossil

fuels

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, and the

energy

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crisis can come sooner than expected with the lack of replacement sources of

energy

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. In conclusion, harmful and unsustainable fossil

fuels

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h

as

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no longer suitable for h

uman

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b

eing,

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and there should be an alternative soon for

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type of

energy

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