In some cultures, children are often told that they can achieve anything if they try hard enough. What are the advantages and disadvantages of giving children this message?

Many communities encourage children to work hard for achieving their desired goals. While I agree that hard work is the key to success, I

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believe that it is more important to choose the right goal before working towards it. Undoubtedly, hard

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is the core of

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task achievement. So

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of putting effort can never be underestimated whether be preparing the soil before sowing seeds or studying for an exam. There are various examples in

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of each civilisation, where people worked so hard in order to achieve a set goal for that point in time.

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, without putting heart into any task, we

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do not

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realise the value of that goal.

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, when a child who is motivated to grow a plant, observes the plant growing after all his efforts while looking after it.That feeling of accomplishment provides him with a different level of inner joy.

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, he realises the value of

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way, working immensely to get the desired result is always motivating and at the same time fulfilling.

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, without having the proper knowledge about

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,working hard is worthless. To put

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, a child should be able to choose an appropriate goal before executing it.

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natural

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has its own role. Two children,

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with varied inclinations towards arts or science, can not meet the same outcome irrespective of

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amount of input given by them. In conclusion, whilst

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benefits of hard work towards getting desired aim are always appreciated, but careful analysis and selection of the aim prior to execution is rather more vital.